The Series 7 opener doesn't grab me as much as I want it to.
There isn't one big overriding flaw in the episode that makes it
inherently bad or anything. The Dalek asylum isn't a bad premise
for an adventure, and the execution of it isn't even that bad
either. My problem with Asylum of the Daleks is that it's filled
with lots of tiny plot holes and inconsistencies I can't ignore
that build up and make the whole thing seem low-effort and
sloppy. As low-effort and sloppy as that horrible filter-heavy
new title sequence.
Despite Amy being willing to commit suicide for Rory in Amy's
Choice and Rory spending 2000 years waiting for Amy in The Big
Bang, some character development happened off screen that now
means they're getting a divorce. Everyone seems to think the
online miniseries Pond Life that was released just before this
episode somehow explains this but it doesn't. There isn't a
single line in Pond Life that justifies the divorce. Four out of
the five parts of Pond Life show Amy and Rory as a happy married
couple and then a short clip in part five shows Rory being
kicked out. That's it. In fact, not only is this not
foreshadowed in any previous episode, but there isn't a single
episode after this that mentions the divorce either. The whole
plotline of the Ponds getting a divorce, a major change in their
lives, is contained entirely to Asylum of the Daleks. In the
course of 45 minutes they go from getting divorced to being
happily married again with nothing achieved. Nothing is learned
from this. All it serves to do is take focus away from the
Daleks and spit in the face of their beautifully-crafted
character arcs from Series 5 and 6.
The Dalek parliament scene is amazing for nitpicking nerds like
me. Firstly, why do the Daleks have a Prime Minister? What does
the Prime Minister do? What qualifies a Dalek to be in the
parliament of the Daleks? Did they all go to Dalek Eton? Are
there opposing political parties of Daleks? How is the Dalek
Prime Minister selected? Is there an election? How can you be
expected to choose between two completely identical, unfeeling,
conniving, bigoted death machines? (I guess it's sort of like
the problem we have now #SATIRE.) No matter how they got to
power though, the Dalek Prime Minister is a fuckin idiot. Their
plan is to send the Doctor, Amy, and Rory into the asylum so
that they can lower the force field, allowing it to be
destroyed. Here's the problem: why have the Daleks created an
asylum with a force field that can only be turned off from the
inside? What if one of the insane Daleks accidently rolls over
the plug and pulls it out of the socket? That seems like a
really inefficient system of keeping them under control.
Actually, let's take one step back: why do the Daleks not just
kill the insane ones in the first place? The Dalek Prime
Minister provides an answer: "It is offensive to us to
extinguish such divine hatred." Clearly Steven Moffat has never
seen Victory of the Daleks or Remembrance of the Daleks or Evil
of the Daleks or literally any other episode where Daleks kill
Daleks. The Prime Minister then says, "does it surprise you to
know that Daleks have a concept of beauty?", a line which
directly contradicts the episode Doomsday, in which a Dalek says
the exact words, "Daleks have no concept of elegance."
Let's forget about continuity for a second because it's obvious
this episode wants us to. According to Asylum of the Daleks,
looking at it as a self-contained piece of fiction disconnected
from the rest of Doctor Who, Daleks don't kill each other. Why
then do they blow up the asylum at the end? It's obviously not
because they think the inmates can escape due to a breach in
their force field created by Oswin's ship because that was only
brought to their attention by the Doctor AFTER he'd already been
recruited. So the Daleks must have already had a different
motivation for wanting to blow up the Asylum even before they
found out about Oswin and the breach. So what, did the Daleks
just decide that hatred wasn't beautiful anymore? Had hatred
gone out of fashion? Why did they need the Doctor before they
found out about the breach to the force field?
Nothing about the Dalek parliament scene makes sense. I
understand they would capture the TARDIS while abducting the
Doctor from Skaro but why in the name of fuck would they then
put the TARDIS right in the middle of the parliament room next
to our heroes so their means of escape is within their reach?
Why are all the Daleks too scared to go down into the asylum?
Daleks have no concept of fear. The fact that the Daleks in Bad
Wolf could feel fear was a huge plot point because those Daleks
weren't pure as they were created from human DNA. So are you
telling me that all the Daleks who are in charge of the Dalek
parliament are all tainted by human emotions? We aren't even 15
minutes in yet.
During this sequence, we are introduced to Oswin Oswald, one of
the many echoes of Clara. Now that I've been able to watch this
episode again after seeing how her mystery plays out in The Name
of the Doctor, I can say that Oswin Oswald's inclusion in Asylum
of the Daleks does make sense and fits the explanation we're
given. However, the reveal at the end of the episode that she's
an insane Dalek doesn't make a lot of sense. Why is it that even
though she spoke like a Dalek, she sounded like a normal human
over the speakers? Why does the Dalek pathweb contain music from
Carmen for her to play? That music couldn't have just been in
her head as all of the other characters heard it. The reveal was
very well executed and it's a nice idea but the small details
just don't quite add up.
I should probably talk about the good stuff in this episode:
everything that wasn't the script. The acting is absolutely
superb with Matt Smith constantly delivering a flawless
performance as the Doctor. Despite how ridiculous the divorce
subplot is, Karen Gillan and Arthur Darvill sell the emotions
and make it a lot more bareable. In fact, the acting is so good
and Nick Hurran's direction is so well done that I didn't notice
half of this episode's problems on first viewing. Murray Gold
provides an incredibly atmospheric music score and the episode
in general looks and sounds great. It's just such a shame that
the script had such holes in it.
The final insult though is the ending twist which, with the
hindsight of knowing how the series ends, is completely and
utterly pointless. It's revealed at the end that Oswin has
deleted all knowledge of the Doctor from the Dalek pathweb,
meaning that every Dalek in existence has now forgotten who the
Doctor is. Because this happens at the end of a series opener, I
thought that this radical change to Doctor Who canon would in
some way inform the arc of the series and show us many more
interesting dynamics to the Doctor/Dalek relationship that has
been evolving on screen since 1963. As it turned out, that was
just wishful thinking. The next time we chronologically see the
Daleks is in The Time of the Doctor, during which the Daleks
regain their memories of the Doctor by harvesting information
from the body of Tasha Lem, thus rendering this entire subplot
pointless. That's two pointless subplots in one 45 minute
episode.
Yeah, this is just a bit naff.
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